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  May 2005
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volume 3 number 2
 
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Marie Lecrivain & Angel Uriel Perales
Luis Rodriguez: poet, journalist, and activist
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Marie Lecrivain
Revelations of a Autodidact
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Julia Bemiss
Rachel Kann's another sad atlas and glistening, glittering
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Laura A. Lionello & Douglas Richardson
Victor Infante's Warhol Days
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Aire Celeste Norell
Richard Beban's What the Heart Weighs
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Peggy Dobreer
Piece By Peace, at Caf? Bolivar
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Carlye Archibeque
Dana Gioia's DISAPPEARING INK: Poetry at the End of the Print Culture
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Francisco Dominguez
Angel Uriel Perales? Long-Poetry and Lyrical Prose
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Angel Perales
Ars Poetica: Rick Bursky, author of The Soup of Something Missing
 
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Julia Bemiss May 2005
   

 

Rachel Kann's another sad atlas and glistening, glittering

    Most everyone knows the giddy, anticipatory feeling of opening a new CD by a favorite artist, especially a double CD. The feeling is likewise when cracking Rachel Kann’s two most recent chapbooks, another sad atlas and glistening, glittering.
    Both chapbooks sparkle, literally, with their soft, glittery blue and yellow covers that radiate not unlike sidewalks on a hot summer’s day. Each chapbook contains eight poems, some ranging from a few pages each to longer poems at four or five pages each.
    Most of the poems have a performance feel; Kann is a seasoned slam poet after all, but they work well on the page simply because the voice is so strong, lucid, and consistent. Kann’s tone is urgent and unrelenting, but it can also be reflective, somber, and even jubilant.
    The overarching theme of Kann’s work seems to be the persistence of life despite its imperfection. Personal failures, hard luck love, compromises and limitations are balanced with a sense of hope woven through the difficulty of challenge and change.
    Many poems probe the complex nature of romantic relationships that turn self-destructive. Three such poems, “parts” and “risetofall” (from glistening) and “wait” (from atlas) are about romantic entanglements hanging by disintegrating threads. In “parts” there is the wish to salvage something from the relationship, anything, to pick up the pieces and establish a new whole, only to find that the “whole” is every bit as cracked and broken. The pain of vulnerability is in full view: “one time while eating at that sidewalk café my/heart leapt straight out of my chest/she lay quivering and pulsating on top of your pasta sauce,” a stunningly heartbreaking image.
    In “risetofall” the drama is heightened between a woman who gives and gives with nothing in return aside from the man’s manipulation and intimidation and is summed up with revelatory insight: “and you/you make a better idea than human being/better in theory than practice.” But this ray of self-revelation is short-lived; the poem ends in self-sabotage: “I am a daredevil who dives headlong/eyes closed, wrists open/playing chicken with dignity/always braced for collision.”
    “wait” is the more hopeful of the three because it is far more self-aware. For every wrong committed there is a realization and a determination to preserve the self from further damage and the willingness to heal any hurt: “I will wait. wait for my heart to rediscover the scent of my/fingerprints and follow it./when I catch wind of her beating wings/I will spirit her/back inside of/me.” Not all of the relationship poems are so dire, however; “12 Days” and “if” are celebratory and supportive and offer a welcome counterbalance.
    Another strong theme in both books is the power of an individual’s voice, specifically female. “Nature” (from atlas) is the longest poem at five pages. It is a call to female empowerment in a society that idealizes femininity and shuns female intuition and instinct for fear that such unleashed power may dramatically alter how we look at ourselves and at each other. It becomes not only about the rise above oppression of women, but the rise above oppression of any marginalized segment of society. To that end, the poem transcends itself.
    Both books employ a diverse, rich, and imaginative selection of wordplay so that the language and the feelings evoked are always in motion, even in quieter moments. The only qualm is that both books have such similar themes and tones that they are indistinguishable from one another. What could have been one chapbook with 16 poems is published as two chapbooks with eight poems apiece. The main difference is that glistening, glittering is a collection of previously published work; another sad atlas contains work, some of it previously performed but never before published.
    A few poems, however, break with Kann’s formidable yet familiar take on life and love. “when the light went out,” (from atlas) and “4:39” (from glistening) are about being purely present in a moment in time and employ a significant amount of sense memory and detail despite their brevity at one page apiece, which actually works in each poem’s favor. The imagery is more of one’s relationship with the natural environment than with one’s relationship to other people and situations and things. These two poems establish their own unique freshness and could take Kann’s future writings in an entirely different direction.
    another sad atlas and glistening, glittering are companion chapbooks that relish life in all its visceral glory and pain and would enrich any personal chapbook collection. They are the next best things to seeing Kann perform live and after the show, you can thankfully take a little bit of Rachel Kann home with you.

another sad atlas, copyright 2004. All Rights Reserved. 23 pgs. Self published by Rachel Kann. Printer: re:press, Hollywood, CA. No ISBN #.

glistening, glittering, copyright 2004. All Rights Reserved. 24 pgs. Self published by Rachel Kann. Printer: re:press, Hollywood, CA. No ISBN #.

copyright 2005 Julia Bemiss

   


Julia Bemiss


author's bio

Julia Bemiss has been published in the San Diego Reader Online, The San Diego Troubadour, WordSD, and in the anthologies for poeticdiversity and the Valley Contemporary Poets. She has featured and read at venues in Los Angeles and San Diego and self-published two chapbooks.