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volume 4 number 2
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Niche Work, If You Can Get It: The Music and Poetry of Norman Ball
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Marie Lecrivain May 2006


Donna Kuhn's typical girl

Donna Kuhn's typical girl (2006 Fine Tooth Press) is anything but. What is considered typical when the poet is constantly viewing the world through a 64-Crayola color spectrum while engaging the id, the superego, the ego, the right and the left sides of the brain in a Sisyphian debate of "Who's on First?"

Kuhn is a painter whose portraits of big-eyed technicolor waifs ( echo the primitivism found in the later works of Paul Gauguin's Tahitian Lolitas. Inevitably, her artistic eye has worked its way into her poetry. Kuhn is a "visual poet" who shamelessly employs gimmicky literary devices to get the reader's attention, in particular the removal/substitution of vowels from/for pronouns: "u" for "you," "yr" for "your," etc. Her favorite metaphors of horses, the moon, birds, birds, birds, seahorses, and more birds permeate the pages of every poem until I am afraid to:

a) go to the zoo/planetarium/aquarium

b) read Stephen King's Cujo or Pet Cemetery

c) watch a Hitchcock movie

d) all of the above

typical is not an easy read because it relies too much on abstraction, heavy metronomic repetitive imagery, and the emerging trend of text message lingo, the last of which frightens me to no end as English grammar has already taken so many lumps from the ever-increasing encroachment of digital progression.

In spite of these tribulations, there is some phenomenal poetry in typical. I found myself surprised by how often a moment of pure loveliness would emerge from the carousal ride that is typical. As I, the reader am tightly clinging for dear life to one of those ubiquitous horses that gallop through Kuhn's poetry, the whirling landscape would suddenly crystallize as in the poem "transparent":

we were talking

u just biting myself

yr hot soup nectarines bark

what a guy

am i rice

open u ice and ice

moon cries ruby red louise burning the vanilla

blue shadows

get with the snow u must

use the bones of and i shut in her,

want snow whatever open

apple bones i am lightly squeezing my

mother into dark cities:

It's those last two lines that grab me. All of a sudden the calliope music stops, the horse slows down, and I am allowed to linger, to drink in this fragrant, awful, majestic image. I GET it! I love it... and then the horse is off again at full speed, leaving me with the desire to pull in the reins, but I cannot, because the poetry will NOT let me. It's not supposed to.

And this is the key to the genius of Kuhn. Her words and devices bludgeon, and then cue the reluctant reader into the necessity to cross eyes into a non-linear perspective; to willingly, though grudgingly, travel through a dreamscape at breakneck speed to confront and contemplate the myriad of ideas that teem beneath the waking world.

The journey through typical reminds me of that scene from the movie Contact where the scientist Eleanor Arroway (played by Jodie Foster) is taken out of real time into a mind-bending journey to make contact an extraterrestrial intelligence. Though every moment of Arroway's flight is fraught with peril, there were pivotal junctures where she was able to catch a glimpse into and marvel at the diversity that is the heart of the multiverse.

typical girl also mirrors the challenge of trying to overcome the daily onslaught of information - both visual and written - that our society is confronted with on a daily basis through the media, advertising, and the Internet. One who reads this collection could use these poems as a meditation exercise to discipline the mind to go with the flow to better appreciate and savor those moments of clarity that come upon her/him before descending back into the techno rat race.

(typical girl, Donna Kuhn, Fine Tooth Press 2006, ISBN 0-9766652-7-1, 72 pages, $11.99)

copyright 2006 Marie Lecrivain


Marie C Lecrivain

author's bio

    Marie C Lecrivain is the executive editor and publisher of poeticdiversity: the litzine of Los Angeles, a jewelry designer, and a writer in residence at her apartment.
    Her prose and poetry have appeared in a number of journals and anthologies, including: The Los Angeles Review, Nonbinary Review, Gargoyle, Pirene's Fountain, Orbis, A New Ulster, and others.
    Marie's newest poetry chapbook, Fourth Planet From the Sun, will be published in 2020 by Rum Razor Press. She's an associate fiction/essay editor for The Good Works Review, and the curator of several anthologies including Octavia's Brood: Words and Art inspired by O.E. Butler (© 2014 Sybaritic Press), Rubicon: Words and Art Inspired by Oscar Wilde's "De Profundis" (© 2015 Sybaritic Press), and Gondal Heights: A Bronte Tribute Anthology (© 2019 Sybaritic Press).
    Marie's avocations include photography; meditation; Libers CCXX and XV; marmosets; Christopher Eccleston, H.P. Lovecraft, and Sean Bean (depending on what day of the week it is); her co-owned cat Guinness; misfit and vintage dolls; the number seven, and sensual tributes upon her neck from male artists-except male poets, who only write about it.

    "Writing is like having sex with a beautiful freak; adventurous and uncomfortable to the extreme." - m. lecrivain 2004

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